Decay Posted December 3, 2018 Share Posted December 3, 2018 Greetings! I am happy to find such a nice community:) This is my first tattoo, I am overall not really happy with how it looks like. My fault - shouldn't have chose too many elements of such different size. So.. the question is - should I go and add more elements (another fox and mushrooms and some flowers) to balance it (small foxes and mushrooms, bigger flowers), or better leave it as is, or.. I am open to all suggestions! And what do you think overall? I like the artist's technique, so will it be wise to come back to him? Attached both fresh and healed. BTW why it became much darker after healing? All the leaves were semi transparent at first, but now they are just dark Attached also my attempt of sketching the possible addition. Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hogrider Posted December 3, 2018 Share Posted December 3, 2018 I'd leave it. It's not a bad tattoo. However, I wouldn't go back to the artist. It's too monochromatic. Get more tattoos. oboogie 1 Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-140898 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decay Posted December 3, 2018 Author Share Posted December 3, 2018 3 minutes ago, Hogrider said: I'd leave it. It's not a bad tattoo. However, I wouldn't go back to the artist. It's too monochromatic. Get more tattoos. Thank you. Would you mind to explain what is meant by monochromatic? So to know what to look at when choosing the next artist.. Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-140899 Share on other sites More sharing options...
SStu Posted December 3, 2018 Share Posted December 3, 2018 Monochromatic = 1 tone. Not enough contrast. Also the darker leaves are not a bad thing. The more "translucent" it starts off being the more likely that a few years down the road it's end up being invisible or indecipherable. Dan and Hogrider 2 Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-140902 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decay Posted December 3, 2018 Author Share Posted December 3, 2018 (edited) Thank you, SStu! Any ideas how to improve the tattoo? I feel it is too primitive and unbalanced.. Edited December 3, 2018 by Decay Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-140903 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hogrider Posted December 3, 2018 Share Posted December 3, 2018 3 hours ago, Decay said: Thank you, SStu! Any ideas how to improve the tattoo? I feel it is too primitive and unbalanced.. I would just suggest being really careful. I've seen way more tattoos made worse by monkeying with them than made better. I would find someone really good at coverups. Not that you should cover it up, but this is not going to be easy to work with. Good luck. It's not a bad tattoo. oboogie 1 Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-140905 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decay Posted December 3, 2018 Author Share Posted December 3, 2018 Maybe not bad, but definitely not spectacular.. It's a pity we don't have a choice of great artists here in Israel. Minimalistic tattoos are so 'in' now here Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-140907 Share on other sites More sharing options...
SStu Posted December 4, 2018 Share Posted December 4, 2018 surround it with awesome tattoos! Learn how to find an artist who already nails the specific style and feel for what you want to wear, and let them do their thing. oboogie, Gingerninja and Hogrider 3 Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-140928 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decay Posted December 4, 2018 Author Share Posted December 4, 2018 That's a problem. I've seen lots of pages of local artists, and if we leave aside those who make minimalistic or geometry (mandalas everywhere!) or old school tattoos, there is nothing left. It is really strange - you open the portfolio and you see all the styles from watercolor to black work. No signs of personal style. Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-140939 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decay Posted December 4, 2018 Author Share Posted December 4, 2018 I want skulls and ravens and bones, but I struggle to imagine what will look nice near my existing tattoo. It may not be cohesive at all.. like, really, what will look nice at the other side of the forearm? Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-140940 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decay Posted December 4, 2018 Author Share Posted December 4, 2018 (edited) And.. I've planned this tattoo for about a year. I've been at several studios, I've read endlessly tattoo forums and subbreddits and educated myself as much as possible. So this tattoo is even more painful to see. If it was a walk-in newbee mistake - ok, it happens. But all this research- and for nothing? .. really discouraging Edited December 4, 2018 by Decay Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-140941 Share on other sites More sharing options...
SStu Posted December 5, 2018 Share Posted December 5, 2018 Where are you located? Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-140949 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decay Posted December 5, 2018 Author Share Posted December 5, 2018 Israel. Poland and Ukraine are also options, but it may be a bit tricky to arrange.. What do you think about this sketch? I've just received it from some of the local artists whom I talked to about touch up. Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-140956 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decay Posted December 5, 2018 Author Share Posted December 5, 2018 I like the plants above the tattoo but it looks like a waste of space. Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-140957 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gingerninja Posted December 5, 2018 Share Posted December 5, 2018 Hey Decay...I like your tattoo. I feel like you are possibly overthinking this and/or just generally unsatisfied. When did you get your tattoo? Again, i think it looks nice. I lean towards @SStu's advice about surrounding it with other awesome tattoos. I like the addition of the plants in the picture above, too. oboogie and Hogrider 2 Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-140959 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decay Posted December 5, 2018 Author Share Posted December 5, 2018 It is new relatively. I don't like it from the start .. I was so excited to find Dan artist who really listen and gives attention, so it lead to excessive relaxation. I saw the sketch without shading, it seemed ok. Then he added the leaves above freehand. First mistake. Then he added shadowing, through it was discuss several times before that I don't want a lot of shading. So now it is unbalanced and cartoonish. These are my inspiration pictures and my drawing. The artist is great, he has a lot of wonderful tattoos in portfolio - suppose it wasn't his best day. Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-140961 Share on other sites More sharing options...
SStu Posted December 7, 2018 Share Posted December 7, 2018 This guy's work seems to be a bit better . . . https://www.instagram.com/dpulsestattoo/ Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-140974 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decay Posted December 9, 2018 Author Share Posted December 9, 2018 All the nice works there done by guest artists, unfortunately Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-140978 Share on other sites More sharing options...
oboogie Posted December 11, 2018 Share Posted December 11, 2018 Why don't you just leave it for now? I think you are going to jack around with it and make it worse. Try not to concentrate on hating it quite so much. Hogrider 1 Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-141009 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decay Posted December 12, 2018 Author Share Posted December 12, 2018 You are right. I am sorry. Funny, I was told today that 'this cabbage' is pretty.. it was an awkward process of explaining that this is not a cabbage, but a flower. I will try to move on and relax about this tattoo. Thank you all!! oboogie 1 Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-141017 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hogrider Posted December 12, 2018 Share Posted December 12, 2018 5 hours ago, Decay said: You are right. I am sorry. Funny, I was told today that 'this cabbage' is pretty.. it was an awkward process of explaining that this is not a cabbage, but a flower. I will try to move on and relax about this tattoo. Thank you all!! If anyone looks at that and thinks it is a cabbage they are just stupid. Dan and oboogie 2 Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-141021 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gingerninja Posted December 12, 2018 Share Posted December 12, 2018 Listen, it doesn't look like a cabbage but even if it did, you know owe anyone an explanation. Cabbages, btw, are really rad examples of nature being beautiful. Dan and oboogie 2 Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-141022 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decay Posted December 12, 2018 Author Share Posted December 12, 2018 Thank you! Cabbage can be really nice, I know:) What can you say about this artist? https://www.instagram.com/nesvetov/ Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-141023 Share on other sites More sharing options...
SStu Posted December 13, 2018 Share Posted December 13, 2018 Now you're talking. Artistry and application look really good. Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-141026 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Decay Posted December 17, 2018 Author Share Posted December 17, 2018 Great, thank you! Booked an appointment in January;) I love his style. Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/8218-first-tattoo-to-stop-now-or-to-elaborate-it-some-pics-and-questions/#findComment-141045 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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