Matthew Thomas Posted March 19, 2014 Share Posted March 19, 2014 The image has been removed by the poster. Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/4964-just-wanting-some-opinions-on-a-logo-i-designed/ Share on other sites More sharing options...
SeeSea Posted March 20, 2014 Share Posted March 20, 2014 It's an interesting idea. You might consider a different font and larger letters. It doesn't read well from a distance. A logo doesn't necessarily have to include the name of the business, unless they want it to be there. A sign would be something different - could be the logo followed by the name on the side. Have fun with it. Mitglied 1 Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/4964-just-wanting-some-opinions-on-a-logo-i-designed/#findComment-88625 Share on other sites More sharing options...
irezumi Posted March 20, 2014 Share Posted March 20, 2014 exume, CultExciter, daveborjes and 2 others 5 Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/4964-just-wanting-some-opinions-on-a-logo-i-designed/#findComment-88626 Share on other sites More sharing options...
CultExciter Posted March 20, 2014 Share Posted March 20, 2014 Yeah, it's definitely flat. You need to think in terms of dynamics and how that plays with image and type. This type of stuff is my day job (not designing for piercing studios albeit). If you'd really like to see what you can come up with, spend some time looking at real design. Just google "graphic design inspiration" or "logo design inspiration" and hundreds of blogs will appear with eye candy. I hope my review was easy enough, but yeah man, right it lacks depth and character. Think of other things, not just the obvious. What esoteric or ancient or even recent history symbolism can be pulled from the name of the place? Dig deeper and you'll find ideas that are more fully engrained in the psyche of people. Fuck. I'm rambling. Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/4964-just-wanting-some-opinions-on-a-logo-i-designed/#findComment-88632 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matthew Thomas Posted March 20, 2014 Author Share Posted March 20, 2014 Thanks for the advice, but due to a disrespectful little smartass, the matter is closed for discussion. Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/4964-just-wanting-some-opinions-on-a-logo-i-designed/#findComment-88633 Share on other sites More sharing options...
bugxjuice Posted March 20, 2014 Share Posted March 20, 2014 yikes irezumi 1 Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/4964-just-wanting-some-opinions-on-a-logo-i-designed/#findComment-88667 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matthew Thomas Posted March 20, 2014 Author Share Posted March 20, 2014 It only takes one rude and disrespectful person to make an ass outta themselves. Now I've taken the image down and have nothing further to discuss on the matter. Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/4964-just-wanting-some-opinions-on-a-logo-i-designed/#findComment-88690 Share on other sites More sharing options...
cltattooing Posted March 20, 2014 Share Posted March 20, 2014 Although I did not actually see the image you posted, SeeSea and CultExciter gave intelligent and mature responses. It seems like a shame that you chose to focus on what may or may not have even been a rude response by one poster, which in my opinion wasn't. If you're gonna ask for opinions and critique, you have to take the good with the bad and laugh at yourself a little. Life isn't so serious, and honestly man, it's kind of silly to delete your work just off of that. Take pride in your work, even if it's not the best job. Learn from your mistakes and take feedback gracefully or don't put it out there cause nobody wants to hear "poor me" when you ask for critique, naw mean? beez, Graeme, RoryQ and 7 others 10 Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/4964-just-wanting-some-opinions-on-a-logo-i-designed/#findComment-88699 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matthew Thomas Posted March 20, 2014 Author Share Posted March 20, 2014 It's done and over with. I've already moved on. Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/4964-just-wanting-some-opinions-on-a-logo-i-designed/#findComment-88702 Share on other sites More sharing options...
CultExciter Posted March 20, 2014 Share Posted March 20, 2014 @cltattooing You're a good egg. bugxjuice, tatB, JAllen and 4 others 7 Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/4964-just-wanting-some-opinions-on-a-logo-i-designed/#findComment-88703 Share on other sites More sharing options...
Matthew Thomas Posted March 20, 2014 Author Share Posted March 20, 2014 And I did appreciate the constructive criticism, but the people who asked me to design the logo are happy with it, I suppose that's all that matters. I got paid, plus some other shit that I can't divulge. The rest is moot at this point. Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/4964-just-wanting-some-opinions-on-a-logo-i-designed/#findComment-88704 Share on other sites More sharing options...
cltattooing Posted March 20, 2014 Share Posted March 20, 2014 @CultExciter oh thank you, dear :3 CultExciter 1 Quote Link to comment https://www.lastsparrowtattoo.com/forum/t/4964-just-wanting-some-opinions-on-a-logo-i-designed/#findComment-88706 Share on other sites More sharing options...
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