What do think of this?

[Mikeywales]

A little design i came up with "That Much Further West" also a song title by Lucero.

Prismacolors on black card! Let me know your thoughts, thanks :)

[CultExciter]

Let me know your thoughts, thanks :)

Hey bud, next time post this in the "How about an art show" thread. It's where we keep these sorts of thoughts/musings/opinions.

And honest critique...you need to expand your tones. You need to find ways to use complimentary colors and shades/tones to create separation. Otherwise, it looks like one big blob. Keep it up though, practice and trial and error is the only way you will progress.

[Mikeywales]

Cheers, sorry i didn't realise there was an existing thread titled that.

Thanks for the constructive criticism!

[Sneaken1]

I like the idea, in my opinion the lettering / font seems off. Maybe it needs an outline or something to tie it into the scroll a little more. Kind of looks tacked on.

Also curious on the size of it, maybe add a coin next to it for a visual reference.

I'm no pro artist but just my thoughts, keep at it man!

Peace,

Ken

[Pyzik]

I am new to the tattoo world so my opinion may not hold much weight, but I think that is awesome!

[Mikeywales]

Yeah i thought that as well, i haven't really had much experience with lettering, definitely something i need to work on! Thanks for the tips, much appreciated, and thanks for looking!

Mike.

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Thanks a lot, much appreciated for checking it out!

[hogg]

I'm not a tattooer, but I have never liked script on a banner. My $0.02.

[Mikeywales]

I did this one is a spur of the moment thing, i just wanted to get it finished. Thanks for looking hogg! :)